DoomGaze Posted April 3, 2003 Report Posted April 3, 2003 Final Words From Me To You ------------------------------------------ Your hand is vibrant with energy, Yet it remains still. Your eyes, so beautiful, so pure, Yet there are voids, emptyness to fill. People you used to know, Invisible you are, pass you by. You have come to think that nobody cares, So you remain, alone, left to die. Shadows lurk around every corner, You must learn to keep them at bay, Neglect not the Present, Past or Future Or worse you'll be with each passing day.
Rahsash Geldich Posted April 4, 2003 Report Posted April 4, 2003 This strikes me as a motivational piece, oddly. The thing I fear the most is not death, but dying with no purpose. They say that Idle hands easily complete the work of the devil, but they are also very good at making things that no one will care much for. The way you put it makes it almost a caution, very interesting and compelling.
Tasslehoff Posted April 6, 2003 Report Posted April 6, 2003 Hey Jeff. Great Work! I read it a long time ago, but as you know I have busy, and well, I finally had a moment to squeeze myself outta bed and join my friends. Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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