Alaeha Posted March 26, 2003 Report Posted March 26, 2003 [continued from description] unbroken. I started this about two days ago, and just let it sit for a bit. I picked it up today and put the last stanza on it. Here it is. Just let me know what you think. Wind Yes, I have always loved the air, it lets us breathe and talk. I feel it blowing through my hair, I hear it saying “Yes, I care” Though not a person, it is there to soothe me when in shock. With wind I have a special bond, with hurricane and breeze. Of warm, soft breezes I am fond, I love the chaos that is spawned by harsh winds blowing ‘cross a pond, though wind chill make me freeze. Though I love wind, there are a few dear friends that I love more. A few rare people that are too important to me, I would rue your loss, so hear this: I love you, though this I’ve said before.
DoomGaze Posted March 27, 2003 Report Posted March 27, 2003 nice imagery Alaeha, i love you comparing wind to a friend, yes, if your out alone, and no one to talk to, the wind is always to listen (HEY I talk to myself and the wind tends to listen YOU ALL DID IT DONT LIE) And yes there a few in my life that are much more important to me than anything else... it is always good to be loved, in one way or another.. Enuff blabble, i like this poem, and i love poems of nature and using it's elements to compare to other things..... Great use of words, love your rhyme scheme and keep writing... THX FOR SHARING! ps..... you tried to get the Thousanth Topic didnt you?!!? MWAHAHAHAH well i have it!!! It's all mine!!!! MWAHAHAHA!!! *cough*cough*
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