DoomGaze Posted March 25, 2003 Report Posted March 25, 2003 - No Escape - ------------------------------------ It isn't working, your Hell's disguise, Because I can see Heaven in your eyes. Don't try to fool me, with that innocent look, I won't be on the list of all the victims you took. Your gaze is as solid as a rock, Every passing moment, you seem to mock. In your own little world, you seem to rule, But in mine, you are nothing but a fool. You give chase to the insanity that feeds you, Even though it renders your skin black and blue. I stay right here, right where I am, Because god forbid, if I follow, I'll be damned. Finally I have escaped your terrible grip, Away from the fears you used to nip. For now I am strong, I am free, Up, up in Heaven, thats where I'll be.
Peredhil Posted April 7, 2003 Report Posted April 7, 2003 Interesting. It has good bones to it, but some of the meter seems forced. I'd like to see you revisit this. It has something powerful to say, but I'm not sure what it is yet.
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