Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 23, 2003 Report Posted March 23, 2003 Like I said, I have no name for this, can anyone help me with naming it??? He stays in a void of black space and time The remnants of a half-life are scattered in his memory He is the evokation of good and evil His mind is in constant tortured turmoil The cries of all the living make up his voice The light and dark of this world are swirled into his eyes Dross armor and shining platemail adorn his wasted form Bedraggled locks hit his shoulders and back In his hands is clutched a banner of night and day He walks in a consant blood war Death is his alias, life is his aliby The spirits of mortals crown his head Eternitiy shines in his orblike eyes He is nothing more than a rag-doll puppet He is the epitemy of doom To gaze into those eyes it to see eternity To touch such skin is to be burned by acid and fire To see him is to see your own death He is hell's angel... He is Heaven's demon... -Ryuu :dragon4:
Tasslehoff Posted March 23, 2003 Report Posted March 23, 2003 Half Breed, you know... For the sense of him being an Angel and also a Demon as you stated in the last Stanza.. Eh, all I could think of
Distarius_WhiteRobes Posted March 23, 2003 Report Posted March 23, 2003 I agree with Tas on this one, totally
reverie Posted March 23, 2003 Report Posted March 23, 2003 Reminds me of either the spirit of Death or Time or both... revery the dreamlost "i like dots..." the dream continues...
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 23, 2003 Author Report Posted March 23, 2003 Half Breed.... Very nicel, Tas. Thank you! -Ryuu :dragon4:
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