Distarius_WhiteRobes Posted March 20, 2003 Report Posted March 20, 2003 (edited) It wasn’t expectation The expectation for change of character It wasn’t false information The information she may think I believe It wasn’t hope The hope everyone has that they won’t end up alone It was her Her I fell in love with, nothing more Where one may see only void I see bliss Where one may see only bitterness I see strength Where one may see only cold I see a fire glowing more brilliantly than any beside it I see a lot of things Things that are true I know a lot of things Things I believe I love a lot of things--- -But she is the only one I’ve ever been sure of To be sure of it is my right To whether or not it’s deserved That is my decision, And I made it long ago Nothing on this earth or beyond could change my mind ------------------------------------------------------------------------------- K, hope all of you could bare to read that; first one I have EVER done. Pretty unorganized, yes--- but it gets my point across -Dis Edited March 20, 2003 by Distarius_WhiteRobes
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 21, 2003 Report Posted March 21, 2003 Yes is does. -Ryuu :dragon4:
Cerulean Posted March 21, 2003 Report Posted March 21, 2003 First poem - shmoem! You've been hiding your light for too long Dis. This is a thoughtful, poignant piece of writing. It seems you have an intuitive feel for rhythm and structure. Lovely! Thank you for sharing this - I look forward to seeing the next. C.
Tasslehoff Posted March 22, 2003 Report Posted March 22, 2003 *does another jig! * HeH.. I miss being a youngin in love.. -sigh-
Gyrfalcon Posted March 22, 2003 Report Posted March 22, 2003 You still are a young'in, Kender- your kind always are. The half-elf applauds and cheers Distarius! It's a good poem, Distarius, and Kokuryuu's reaction said that it was well received. Gyrfalcon watches the two :wub: and just grins.
WrenWind Posted March 23, 2003 Report Posted March 23, 2003 *Reads it again with a smile in rememberance of time long past * Lovely sentiment and well done .
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 23, 2003 Report Posted March 23, 2003 Kokuryuu twitches at Gyrfalcon's comment -Ryuu :dragon4:
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