Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 20, 2003 Report Posted March 20, 2003 To the one I love, I give my heart. I give to him the very core of my being. But is it enough? Are such semi-precious gifts worthy of him? Apprehension and confusion. They set my blood black and my heart to ash. Depression causes my soul to whither, Nothing is left but a quivering lump left behind high walls. To the one I love, I give these tainted gifts. The ash and cold of my heart that seems to please him. The scared, sniveling being of my soul suits his need. But can I keep it thus? The colors of my core are not bright. I am not lovely under it all, Just a cowardice shrew of a fake. The façade I build seems to fool him though. To the one I love, I owe something more. Raw bitter emotion is no longer enough. His undeserved love is overwhelming to the extreme. Can’t he see that I’m not worth such affection? Yet, he alone has the truly rare ability to see me. He sees the me that even I cannot reach. In his eyes alone shines my speck of a glittering being. He finds this acceptable, shouldn’t I? -Ryuu :dragon4:
Tasslehoff Posted March 20, 2003 Report Posted March 20, 2003 as corny as it may sound, due to the rather weird feelings of emotion I have raging with in myself, this poem made me cry.. must go get tissue.. Very well done Ryuu... So very touching.. *sniff*
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 20, 2003 Author Report Posted March 20, 2003 Thank you, Tas. Not that I like to hear someone cry, but I'm very glad you liked it so much. -Ryuu :dragon4:
Distarius_WhiteRobes Posted March 20, 2003 Report Posted March 20, 2003 To the one I love, I owe something more. Raw bitter emotion is no longer enough. His undeserved love is overwhelming to the extreme. Can’t he see that I’m not worth such affection? yes, you are
Alaeha Posted March 21, 2003 Report Posted March 21, 2003 Glad I'm not the only fool who's gone and fallen in love while still young... If he loves you, and he's "satisfied" with you as you are, there's no need to worry about "making" yourself worthy... You already are. But I find that I feel like this myself sometimes... A very good poem.
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 21, 2003 Author Report Posted March 21, 2003 Thank you... -Ryuu :dragon4:
Tasslehoff Posted March 21, 2003 Report Posted March 21, 2003 AwWwWw!! How cute! *does a jig for Distarius & Ryuu*
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 21, 2003 Author Report Posted March 21, 2003 *blushes horribly* Oh god.... -Ryuu :dragon4:
Distarius_WhiteRobes Posted March 21, 2003 Report Posted March 21, 2003 Hahahah, that is SO cool--- I can't tell you how many times I've wished some one would just start "jigging" with it. Well, good FRIDAY morning everybody. And Yo Tas----do you have Yahoo Messanger? If not, get it! It's so much cooler than all the other IM services. My name is Distephano70 on there.
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 21, 2003 Author Report Posted March 21, 2003 Yes, Tas. If you get Yahoo, my sn in ryuu_majere8..... I have AIM too. Dmoose88. We should talk some time. -Ryuu :dragon4:
Tasslehoff Posted March 21, 2003 Report Posted March 21, 2003 la la la.. I have both.. AIM = LaViTzCa ( I have SO many different names. lol ) Yahoo = Bluepenguino69 ( GO PENGUINS! THEY ARE SEXY! :woot: )
Kokuryuu Flameshifter Posted March 21, 2003 Author Report Posted March 21, 2003 Arleady talking to you! -Ryuu :dragon4:
Gyrfalcon Posted March 22, 2003 Report Posted March 22, 2003 *grins* What the kender and the mage said. *Gyrfalcon grins at the fiercely blushing dragon and the grinning mage*
Celiwyn Posted March 22, 2003 Report Posted March 22, 2003 Beautiful... What a wonderful poem. Love is a wonderful thing isn't it?
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