whynotsin Posted March 16, 2003 Report Posted March 16, 2003 The FIX Pop it in, I can’t live with out my fix. My hands begin to tremble if I haven’t pooped one before 9:00 am. I would do anything to feel it slide down my throat, To feel the beautiful release it brings, I can’t just have one, no I need to have them all. Every dose larger then the one before. Random thoughts stream into my mind. The quick brown fox jumps over the lazy dog. I nervously look around as I creep down to get my fix, Making sure no one is around to claim my prize. Alone to my room I go with loot in tow. The door closes behind, I run to the bed, I take out my bowl and my spoon. And I dive in, I GOTA HAVE MY POPS.
Blondemoon Posted March 16, 2003 Report Posted March 16, 2003 hehe...again, another one where I started out thinking you meant one thing, and it turned out to be something else entirely. I like how you started this off with a serious tone, even the words bowl and spoon didn't tip me off that this was actually about cereal. Just a couple spelling errors that need fixed (yes, I'm a closet spelling freak ).
Peredhil Posted March 16, 2003 Report Posted March 16, 2003 Laughs in delight. Not to take away from those who are in the grip of drug addiction, but this was a great tongue-in-cheek post!
Archaneus Posted March 16, 2003 Report Posted March 16, 2003 Lol. I agree with blondemoon, expertly perpetrated. The others have said anything I wanted to say so I am reduced to agreeing Lol. Great job.
Rune Posted March 27, 2003 Report Posted March 27, 2003 *giggles* I was also sorta swept up in an image of some sort of drug, only to be surprised by candy coated sweetness! (in milk of course) Too good, too too good. (well the first thing that popped into mind was actually KEI, but I wont go into that *chuckles*)
Ayshela Posted April 1, 2003 Report Posted April 1, 2003 ooh, ooh.. KEI! Gotta have my fix!! (giggle) excellently done! though i must shamefully confess that at the line "every dose larger than the one before" i felt a sudden urge to dash out for a quad mocha.
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