WrenWind Posted March 14, 2003 Report Posted March 14, 2003 *waits with baited breath for the next post *
Peredhil Posted March 14, 2003 Report Posted March 14, 2003 sneaks in to listen quietly. "This is powerful work, and well written," He whispers to Wren. "Even more gripping in that its based on true events - her father's story. Wowsers."
Rune Posted March 14, 2003 Report Posted March 14, 2003 (edited) Even more gripping in that its based on true events - her father's story.This is a true story, with a bit of artistic liscense thrown in to make it interesting when it was otherwise dull. The names were even left the same with the exception of my grandfather..Whose name does not appear in the story. This is mainly because I never knew him and it is custom not to speak directly of a relative one has not met by first name but rather by title in my family. You can say "my Grandfather was there", but not "Albert was there" and so on and so on. BTW: I will edit this story from time to time to correct grammer/re-word things. So if you spot something that doesnt look right drop me a PM. Could a Mod split the topic and move it to the Critics Corner? Steps in, waves his magic wand. It shoots sparks and nothing happens. Muttering about Ancient equipment, waves it again. The commentary magically splits from the story. As you wish. Pats the Pen's Lillest Demoness on the head fondly. Edited March 14, 2003 by Peredhil
Rune Posted March 14, 2003 Report Posted March 14, 2003 Thanks! Now the comments are here and people can ramble on if they want.
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