autumn_sun Posted March 13, 2003 Report Posted March 13, 2003 I get REALLY bored in English a lot, and this just kinda came to me while I was half asleep. Erm...is unfinished stuff allowed here? Cos it's kinda not done...Sorry Oh my love, what have I done? I've gone and did the things I promised from the very beginning I wouldn't do Kill me now Kill me with the passion you loved me with Slide the knife down my cheek like it's your hand, Pour the poison down my throat and feel it course through me Kill me, kill me now... Tonight we part, kill me with the passion you loved me with ~ Autumn Sun
Peredhil Posted March 14, 2003 Report Posted March 14, 2003 Unfinished stuff IS allowed. In one of the member areas you can't see, there is a Writer's Workshop devoted just to such works. I think that when you first have the idea, the most important thing is to retain it on paper or in the computer before it is choked by the distractions of the world. then you can revisit it when you will, and rework, revise, and rewrite. In reading literary biographies, some of the great works of art have started as doodles or a brief idea jotted on a piece of scrap paper. Oh! Welcome to the Pen by the way. -Peredhil
autumn_sun Posted March 15, 2003 Author Report Posted March 15, 2003 Unfinished stuff IS allowed. In one of the member areas you can't see, there is a Writer's Workshop devoted just to such works. I think that when you first have the idea, the most important thing is to retain it on paper or in the computer before it is choked by the distractions of the world. then you can revisit it when you will, and rework, revise, and rewrite. In reading literary biographies, some of the great works of art have started as doodles or a brief idea jotted on a piece of scrap paper. Oh! Welcome to the Pen by the way. -Peredhil =bows= thank you...pardon my stupidity...I didn't know...erm...thanks for not killing me.... ~ Autumn Sun
Rune Posted March 24, 2003 Report Posted March 24, 2003 Welcome to the pen. ^__^ Sorry I am late in responding. I tend to get behind on new poems and whatnot. I think this is a great start and would love to see it finished!
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