whynotsin Posted March 12, 2003 Report Posted March 12, 2003 I listen to a lot of classical music, so when I write something if you haven’t noticed it has something to do with music, so what ever. (Rhapsody) The melody strong. I think of the one. The strings that are plucked , Sound through the hall. The bows as they fly Caress the heart, And sooth the mind With a musical hum. The tempo growing ever quicker Bringing you to new heights, And with a sudden halt. Slo----ws. As your mind races through valleys Made of notes. You take care not to note, The spiraling tune and the erratic mood. The tempo draw to a quicker pace and, Once more you draw close to the air, With arms spread out as float to the earth On the back of an overture. Sliding down the bars And landing in a pool. Called done.
Rune Posted March 13, 2003 Report Posted March 13, 2003 Wow, I got caught up in that one. I could hear the music and see the notes and the orchestra. I am always impressed when someone can paint a visual picture of sound. Great job. Only thing that stands out that seems alittle odd is: "Made of notes. You take care not to note," The repetition of the word note so close together.
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