Yabden Posted March 12, 2003 Report Posted March 12, 2003 My shining light i no longer see, Please will someone watch over me An angel came and thence was gone Summoning the darkness before the dawn From where it came i shall not know Perhaps from a dream long ago... Whisking away the lantern in flight Until the daylight turns to night As the darkness fills the sky The midnight air can not but cry A cascading shriek heard all but here To put forth that the end is near Crushing down the walls of stone Breaking all including bone Here is now, and gone is life Dispatched by a forgiving knife Fade but now until your adrift Be the wind in every crack and rift Goodbye my friends, for now you see There is nothing left of me My life is now in darkness black Forever shall be, no turning back!
Rune Posted March 13, 2003 Report Posted March 13, 2003 Its like a mini epic poem. Tragedy! Magestic sights! Good stuff. Great job Yabden, I look forward to reading more of your stuff..and welcome to the Pen!
Peredhil Posted March 13, 2003 Report Posted March 13, 2003 Wow Yabden... I didn't know you had such words in you. Good job! I look forward to reading more.
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