Queen Seruth Posted March 11, 2003 Report Posted March 11, 2003 Sunset As I watch the sun set yonder I grow wearisome and somber I think about the life I've led I now know I should have fled Now as I watch the beauty flee I now know that I am free c 2001
Archaneus Posted March 11, 2003 Report Posted March 11, 2003 Good work. Since I don't remember seeing anything else around with your name I'm going to guess you are a new member so... WELCOME!
Rune Posted March 13, 2003 Report Posted March 13, 2003 Good work. I stumbled over "now know" but I think that is just me. I kept trying to say "know now" and it threw the flow of the poem off a tiny bit. Thank you for sharing, and Welcome to the pen.
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