Vlad Posted March 9, 2003 Report Posted March 9, 2003 I hide and wait, To see your life, Don't animate- Me from this strife. In the shadows, I seek and squirm, What no one knows, I have to learn. You are beauty- That has been scarred, By what you see, And your own heart. _________________________ Hmm... 4 syllables per line, Consistent rhyme structure, I like this one...
whynotsin Posted March 9, 2003 Report Posted March 9, 2003 (edited) Very very good.....for a (commiE) just kiding lol. I have jokes, ha har har. Edited March 9, 2003 by whynotsin
Archaneus Posted March 9, 2003 Report Posted March 9, 2003 I like, Vlad. just curious, what made you write this?
whynotsin Posted March 9, 2003 Report Posted March 9, 2003 what drives any of us. that should be a forum of it's own.
Vlad Posted March 9, 2003 Author Report Posted March 9, 2003 Whynotsin - you spelled commie wrong Arch - A popular girl that became unpopular simply because she was so popular. Ya, you think about that one... Whynotsin - Forum? No... Thread in C- room? I think there is one... (kinda old though)
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