whynotsin Posted March 5, 2003 Report Posted March 5, 2003 The world slips away Watch me die Won’t you Just this night I’m entering a hopeless situation Be with one last time, Before I slip away Before I fade away The lines of time converge on this single point’ So that you and I can be together for one last night Before the cold night consumes me forever, Stay and watch me slip away Hold my dying body closes before it fades Look into my eyes like a caring mother Hold me tighter then life Let this be my final fantasy. Already I feel the cold bite of eternity at my heels Already I sense a void come over me, Nothing left to do. But let go.
Zariah Posted March 9, 2003 Report Posted March 9, 2003 This is also very sad. It is almost like the chorus of a song. I like the ending the best, it feels like a conclusion of letting go is the best for both of them. I am intrested in reading a piece that is positive. Keep posting.
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