whynotsin Posted March 5, 2003 Report Posted March 5, 2003 Far Gone Love I can’t look at you, those eyes and those lips. Your body brings madness to my eyes your thought destroy me. I can’t feel your skin or your face. my fingers don’t find your body. I fall apart without you. To caress your face to feel the beat of your heart in your chest . I need you here with me. Why then have you gone My days are with out a sun and my night without stars or moon. This world truly is cruel and you so like it. Come back my dove. Fly back to me. my heart bleeds, as you leave. Reason is now lost to a loveless fool O woe is there no way for your return then so like wise no reason do I live the blade is swift, It’s verdict quick. Return to me before the world losses all reason in my eyes. One quick thrust should be enough. to end it all. Maybe your better of with out me. I’ve been alone before.
Zariah Posted March 9, 2003 Report Posted March 9, 2003 Wow, this is really sad. I feel the loss with you. As a thought- check the spelling Also- If you have a particular style, I would recommend possibly adding dashes, as a device to enhance the pauses.
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