Alaeha Posted March 2, 2003 Report Posted March 2, 2003 Well, this is a nice, cheery poem. A nice "celebration" for acceptance... Many thanks to those who wished me a happy birthday, and such. Lost in the Mind Darkness swirls overhead Lost alone in lands long dead I wander with eyes that have long since gone blind in the twisted dark ruins, the halls of my mind. In mem’ries I thought I had lost long ago, I find I’m engulfed once again. The images strike me, and drag me although I may fight with the strength of three men. Horrors gather all around, Springing up from underground. Terrors strike, stabbing me deep in my heart, Until, losing sanity, I fall apart. And now that the torment has taken it’s toll, I continue to wander, a lost, tortured soul.
Blondemoon Posted March 2, 2003 Report Posted March 2, 2003 wow...given recent RL experiences...this really really strikes me. kind of right there, right in the gut. I think this is an excellent piece.
Vlad Posted March 2, 2003 Report Posted March 2, 2003 This is good. I had to read it a few times to get the meaning of it, but it got to me. Some of the wording seems out of place, but I like it.
Archaneus Posted March 2, 2003 Report Posted March 2, 2003 I really like this one, Alaeha. I can't really say much else but good job.
Tasslehoff Posted March 2, 2003 Report Posted March 2, 2003 WoW. Very good owrk there buddy! Great job, Great Job!! I like it a lot
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