Nyyark Posted February 28, 2003 Report Posted February 28, 2003 Gravity, blue, black and gray. Another drop falls from the sky Hits the puddle, merges, Then dies. Fading and falling Back into the rainswept mists Shadowed by the tires hiss My figure A lonley gray, going now, fading away. Lost in the sky My final cry Faintly follows Goodbye...
Zariah Posted February 28, 2003 Report Posted February 28, 2003 I really like the imagery in this poem. Also concept of fading, falling in the sky, this lonileness is present throughout with use of the color gray... nice. I like this.
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