Vlad Posted February 27, 2003 Report Posted February 27, 2003 This has been going on for a long time now The last breath, Then what? It's all the same to me. You dare not say. The pain is real, the horrid pain Your pain reaches mine, And I fall among friends, fall unknown. I hear the damned voices A simple tearing at my heart These tears flow from my eyes, What am I to feel? Made from the works of: Vlad, Peredhil, Rival, Tasslehoff, DoomGaze, Rune, Alaeha, James Devin, Falcon, Deadly Nightshade... I think that's everbody. Enjoy.
Archaneus Posted February 27, 2003 Report Posted February 27, 2003 The last one of these I saw looked like a conglamoration that didn't really work together but this one does.
Nyyark Posted February 28, 2003 Report Posted February 28, 2003 Reminds me of reading the Contents in a collection of Walt Whitman poems. Wouldn't have known what you did if you hadn't said so, so I guess you succeeded. Good job
Alaeha Posted February 28, 2003 Report Posted February 28, 2003 *laughs* I'm flattered to have been included. Amazing how you made it all flow together. It seemed like it was all one poem, save for the slight differences in style. I think we've found the Dr. Frankenstein of Poetry.
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