Rune Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 Um, 5 min poem. Posted here instead of the WW because I have no plans of rewriting. staring out at the bleak black night unable to sleep, will this storm ever end? cursing the flashes, a magestic sight bite in the air, howling winds the rain pelts the walk, the plants all drowned motionless I stare, facination in me what was that noise? I can feel my heart pound as the wind carries bloody, natural debris I reach out to God, will he hear my prayers? please keep me safe, alive and well. but the fury of the storm is uncompared as nature's beasts prove, they too are frail On a side note, bloody, natural debris does not mean blood as in human blood. Its a description of the debris meaning of the flesh and blood of the trees and plants from which the debris came from. No body parts flyin around..just leaves and bark and stuff.
Peredhil Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 That rather makes me appreciate I'm in the house looking out!
Tasslehoff Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 Well thats good its not bloody human parts. Very nice poem Rune, it flows very well!
Archaneus Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 Ooh. Nice job Rune. I always like things about nature and you told of nature as a living organism. Me likes, lol.
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