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Fields of Fame

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Flowers blossom in an untamed land.

They sit ever so still,

Yet wild they stand,

And every void they fill.

 

I pass it everytime,

And the wind echoes my name.

Begging me, to commit a crime,

To reach a certain degree of fame.

 

But still I refuse,

Despite the fortune they promise me,

To go where they choose,

They think I'm blind, that I can't see.

 

Centuries pass, still it remains untouched,

I still walk these fields at night.

Thinking back on the times I missed so much,

They still whisper to me, but I continue to fight.

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I really like this. It shows the ability of good to conquer evil.

My favorite stanza is the first. I believe this is the word choice and the rhyme. I think its the terms untamed, wild, and the concept of the flowers filling every void. Great job, please post more like this!

Edited by crowgirl1126
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