Archaneus Posted February 18, 2003 Report Posted February 18, 2003 (edited) I actually went with a rhyming scheme this time. Raven A single raven circles overhead Another one has fallen, dead Some other raven sees the sight It comes over and starts a fight The battle wages till only one is left The other one dead by a cleft The victor indulges in its spoil It flies away, leaving the loser leaking blood as oil Edited February 18, 2003 by Archaneus
Deadly Nightshade Posted February 18, 2003 Report Posted February 18, 2003 Wow, vary nice....Hm...I wonder what a raven tastes like....
HopperWolf Posted February 18, 2003 Report Posted February 18, 2003 I like the savage imagery plus I'm a fan of rhyming schemes, they can add to the serious tone, or black humour. depends greatly on how you use it.
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