Deadly Nightshade Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 (edited) I walk through the shadows Through the abyss I feel my heart race Nearly beating from my chest No, no I cannot be consumed by my fears I will not A cold sweat forms at the back of my neck The silence nearly overwhelming me I must push forward I cannot give up my feet wont move Somthing looms in the shadows I stop my breath for a moment A hot beath now upon my neck I turn on one heel... Draw a shuttering breath Gleaming fangs A voilent grasp I try to scream Nothing but a frail gasp A calmness fills me Warm lips on my neck I no longer fight ...All is still..... Edited February 16, 2003 by Deadly Nightshade
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 Wow. I like a lot. I think you captured the victim of a vampire's "kiss" perfectly. Great job.
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