Deadly Nightshade Posted February 15, 2003 Report Posted February 15, 2003 What if life was a bowl of soup? Tempting and warm Soothing to ones belly Would you eat all as fast as you can? enjoy it greatly it singes your tongue but you dont care It was just one more thrill but now its gone so quickly drained away Would you just watch it not wanting to be burned? Have it cool to your liking Be safe from the burn But realize its too cold And have it waste away Either way It will soon be gone And after that Then what?
Mira Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 The poem was good, like warm chicken noddle soup. Mmmmmm....
Canid Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 Canid would lift each spoon and blow on it's contents to cool it to her liking, repeating this until it was no longer nessesary as the entire bowl had cooled to the desired temperature..... not that she has any objection at all to cold soup.
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 Hahaha. No offense if you didn't mean it to be, but I found this one pretty funny. The concept of comparing life to a bowl of soup that is. Good job.
Rune Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 Ooo interesting outlook on life. Good question in there as well. Great job Nightshade. Thank you for sharing.
Alaeha Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 Good poem... but I had been under the impression that life was a box of chocolate. Ahh well. But my dittos to Canid. And I'd probably add salt.
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