Cerulean Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 A Valentine for Huda, my Iraqui student Will you sift through the sand for his blood, my love Will you rub through the mud of your tears? Will the lies in their eyes guide your hands, my love Will the lie of the land calm your fears? Will they choke on the bones of your love, my dove Will they splinter the span of your smile? Or will night clasp your light in its glove, my love Starving the dawn with its wile. A Valentine for my mother Hell is in the spaces between words docking, this time we're clocking, ears pressed to the phone, choking on pauses. The lore of love says - you won't ask me to come home, because you know I can't refuse you. Anti-Valentine, from Dubai 8000 miles from Washington, 800 from Baghdad. You make me want to burn the Union Jack. Those things you seek to take aren't yours, Such filth won't wash from stinking claws. Some things, once sold, Can never be bought back. A Valentine for him Thanks - for the joy the heart-glue and you.
The Portrait of Zool Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 Nice. Happy Valentine's day to you!
Cyril Darkcloud Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 What better things to read on a day better known for softer words and sugared sentiments than the clear cadences that are born of the stern and vigorous movements with which the heart pumps unsweetened blood? Cerulean, these pieces are stunning. In fact, it was a real pleasure to be logged on this morning and watch them take shape over in the Writers’ Workshop. You have quite a talent.
Gyrfalcon Posted February 15, 2003 Report Posted February 15, 2003 The half-elf applauds- as always, Cerulean's poetry is simple yet powerful.
Rune Posted March 1, 2003 Report Posted March 1, 2003 I have read through these poems at least 10 times nowadays. I keep trying to put into words what I wanted to say, but I cant. The first one is most impressive, for some reason it really hits me hard. The rest are amazing as well. Thank you for sharing.
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