Cerulean Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 (edited) wiping wet from cheeks i damn lands that sing war like a jingle leaving others to ring hands over the dead. This appeared when I was working on something else entirely in The Writer's Workshop, funny how that happens sometimes. C. Edited February 14, 2003 by Cerulean
The Portrait of Zool Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 Your poetry has lost none of it's power I see. I certainly hope to see much more.
Mira Posted February 15, 2003 Report Posted February 15, 2003 (edited) If only they would fight wars with words Edited February 15, 2003 by Mira
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 Short and to the point, just like this comment.
Rune Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 Its amazing that often the smallest packages can contain the strongest messages. Great poem, Thank you for sharing.
Peredhil Posted February 25, 2003 Report Posted February 25, 2003 I'm glad you followed your Muse and wrote this. Sometimes discipline is knowing when to ignore the 'to-do' list. you have no idea how happy I am to see you back and writing again. -P
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