Mira Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 I was reading through the notebook that I write most of my stuff in and stumbled on this poem I wrote back in November of 2000. I don't I've posted it anywhere so here it is. I look out my window Into the darkness My eyes see nothing, But I see it so clear My life before me it lays like a pattern. So different from the others, I'm free from it all, Untill it sucks me up and carries me away....
Tasslehoff Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 You know. I agree with that poem.. When you finally think you are leading your own life, and on teh way, others life and problems sweep you up and away!
The Portrait of Zool Posted February 14, 2003 Report Posted February 14, 2003 So here is an exercise in life architecture - suck up your own life, chew it up, and blow bubbles... It can be fun.
Rune Posted February 24, 2003 Report Posted February 24, 2003 Very true, when we think we are the ones in control..often we find out we are simply following. Great poem, short and expressive.
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