Mira Posted February 13, 2003 Report Posted February 13, 2003 So I decided that I would write a poem and pretend I was insane. ( it really wasn't that hard ) For those of you who don't know, people with schizophrenia often talk in a rhyming, incoherent, speech. I tried to duplicate this, but unfortunately you might understand some ideas in the poem.As I laid there on My bed thoughts Running and Racing thru my head And Nonchalantly as it seams my head Was filled with Odious dreams Of bitting wires and Lighting Fires and pointless Smite-ing with Bolts of lightning A holocaust Of sorts to Rid me of these wretched warts Warts of Humanity and Insanity A type of Mania of the mind that tastes like week-old Turpentine My thoughts are kinda hard to Swallow and leave me felling blank and Hollow I'm glad you liked it. And if you didn't I'll kill you ( just kidding )
Gwaihir Posted February 13, 2003 Report Posted February 13, 2003 an interestign way of putting yourself into another's mind. Well done :yuismile:
Mira Posted February 14, 2003 Author Report Posted February 14, 2003 Thanks, I might not kill you now
Zariah Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 Very creative use of font adjustment. One time, I created an entire picture out of wrds from my poetry, so I appreciate your creativity. Also, I like your rhyming and use of language. Write more!
Rune Posted March 11, 2003 Report Posted March 11, 2003 Ooo Visual stuff i always my favorite! I always like when people use font, size, and formatting to emphasize parts of their poems and work. It adds alot for me, since i am a visual person. This is great work! Thank you so much for sharing.
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