Tasslehoff Posted February 13, 2003 Report Posted February 13, 2003 Hidden Questions dont turn away from me now listen to these whispers flowing from my lips to your ears cant you see what lies between us the past buried 6ft underground - I just wanted to love you.. cant you see what is meant to be why do you run and hide, fight the destiny the stubborniss lies in your soul- nothing to gain from fighting these words written by the hands of pain you will see one of these days opening your eyes, letting the light in - I just wanted to love you, unconditionally true why do you run and hide, fight the destiny the stubborniss lies with in your depths along with your lies and immaturity all mixed in with falsified purity cant you see our iner-twined destiny- breaking the glass as my whispers heighten to screams screams of painfull memories re-lived throught your blood stained words just wanting to love you cant you see, I just wanted to love, cant you see... I dont know why.. But I love that peom, but I hate it at the same time..
Falcon2001 Posted February 13, 2003 Report Posted February 13, 2003 I know the feeling. I'll reread it when I'm awake and comment on it.
Archaneus Posted February 13, 2003 Report Posted February 13, 2003 OMG!!!!! Awesome!!! I think this is probably one of my favorite poems I've read. Do you hate it and love it at the same time, because it was inspired by the events mentioned but it's a good poem?
Tasslehoff Posted February 14, 2003 Author Report Posted February 14, 2003 I suppose you are right Arch.. I suppose that is why.
Rune Posted February 21, 2003 Report Posted February 21, 2003 Very nice Tassle. As always a wonderful poem. you will see on of these days Think that should be: you will see one of these days
Tasslehoff Posted February 21, 2003 Author Report Posted February 21, 2003 Damn spelling monster. He always finds me and torments me!
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