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I don't mean to offend anyone with talking about God, and for goodness sakes, I'm not going to go around converting everyone. I just write this about faith in general, and what it can do for you.

 

 

 

So many are drowning in the world

It sometimes kinda makes me sick

To know that there is blinding light

But solutions don't always click.

 

Why do people seek oblivion

When all they want is love?

They say there is no beauty left,

What about the sky above?

 

Why can't they take the idea

Someone's watching over them,

Wants to reach out and help?

They are shoving away a gem.

 

Because stop and really think

What if someone really was?

Someone is there with you,

Reasonably doing things he does.

 

So by all reason, don't worry

He's in control and knows best

Live your life to the fullest

And he will take care of the rest.

 

Everything that hurts you

Isn't too much for you to bear

Because if it really was,

Why would God put it there?

 

If you think you're ugly,

You're dysfunctional, all wrong

Know that someone made you

Your parts He thought on long.

 

Unburden your hearts from

All that weighs upon your soul

Faith is something that often

Can re-make you whole.

Edited by Rahsash Geldich
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Have you ever thought about the possibility that faith and god are just concepts created by our imaginations in an effort to put responsibility for our actions on someone else, or to feel like someone cares, or any other number of reasons? I just view god as a limiting factor in society. Sory, didn't mean to turn this into a philisophical discussion.

 

I like the way you worded it, but as I stated above I don't care for the message presented. Regardless a good poem :D .

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Normally, I'm not overly religious or faithful, or even optimistic, but this week I made a goal to try to be positive and just trust. It might be my imagination, but good things are more apt to happen when you're looking up. ::purrs a bit, unable to explain it all in words well::

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Arch:

Have you considered that we naturally seek a God or some higher being because we Know it to be there, or we are designed to? Why else would every culture, while seperately evolving, always assume a religion?

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taps foot like the pulse... good topic... nice to believe in above... i'm a little too jaded of late to share in your ethuasiam... but it's still nice to hold on too...

 

revery

the dreamlost

"sociopaths are bad m'kay"

the dream continues...

Edited by reverie
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I have personally had some rather inexplicable experiences that have 'opened my eyes' to things unseen, at least in so far as having to admit that my own limited senses are horribly inadaquate to solve the universe.

 

I also am not going to endeaver to 'convert' anyone, but I will remind everyone that cynicism is a bias, just as much as any enthusiasm.

 

Beautiful poem, Rahsash.

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