DoomGaze Posted February 11, 2003 Report Posted February 11, 2003 (edited) Brink of Insanity ----------------------------- You can feel it coming, Emerging from the deepest corners of your mind. Different voices speak, ever so haunting, Your thoughts, so hard to find. You can feel it rushing in your veins. You desperately try to pull yourself together, Reaching where the last of your sanity reigns. But all hope is lost, gone forever. It fills your eyes, circling around, Pushing out all the good you have left. Madness overflows in you, and hits the ground, How can it take this away? This is theft! Now everyday, you feel like this, Locked up, in a stray jacket and all. You speak, talking about the things you miss, But it doesn't help, as you continue your fall. Edited February 12, 2003 by DoomGaze
Archaneus Posted February 11, 2003 Report Posted February 11, 2003 Hey! You wrote this one about me. haha. I like this one. It's a topic I write about or is conveyed in my stuff often. *The men in white are here for me... Get that jacket away from me!* ~insert insane cackle here~ Seriously though, nice poem.
Vlad Posted February 12, 2003 Report Posted February 12, 2003 Madness overflows in you, and hits the ground, Need I say it?Its good, I especially like the imagery... (Wow, I say that a lot) Especially that one line... *evil grin*
Elvida Posted February 18, 2003 Report Posted February 18, 2003 nice....insanity is cool.I love being insane.:D:D
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