jamesdevin Posted February 9, 2003 Report Posted February 9, 2003 Utter Pain To feel pain, is to be alive, but your pain is like no other, your pain is but death. You are the grim reaper, death of all emotions, the one I hate, totally utterly death. I lost myself, when I saw you, I know why, your more evil than any devil. You should die, your not worth the pain, you destroy me, rip me apart, your nothing but utter pain and death.
Rune Posted February 15, 2003 Report Posted February 15, 2003 You write such powerful, dark, raw, and ruthless poems. >__< They almost hurt to read at times. That does not mean they are bad, just means that they do a great job of portraying the emotion they were written about. Good job, well done.
Archaneus Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 I like the way you wrote it. It sounds like someone who is actually thinking this and maybe getting pissed about it?
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