Tasslehoff Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 Posa giù oltre a Lei, Girare guardare dentro i Suoi occhi, Emozioni mescolate; Non intelligente quello che dovrei fare, Baciare il lato del Suo collo; Profumo dolce, Arresto guardare nella Sua anima. Vista che potrebbe sbagliare, L'essenza trascina mi più vicino, Armato ha avvolguto intorno il Suo corpo, Baciare i Suoi labbra offre in pagamento d'un debito, Arresto guardare nella Sua anima, Vista che potrebbe sbagliare, Voglia fermare; Avere bisogno di continuare, Meravigliare quello che dovrei dire, Vista che ha posato giù su cima di me, Baciare il lato del mio collo, Spedire freddi sul mio spina dorsale, Cercare di resistere a; Avere bisogno di fermare, Guardare nella Sua anima, Vista quello forse questo è giusto, Mi inclino in baciare di nuovo; Stoping sotto la luce mezzanotte Esattore i nostri sensi; Nostro piccolo segreto, :: fa tacere:: non lascia loro conosce:: fa tacere:: WoW. It feels good working with some Italian. Now I dont remember all the rules and accents, so I probably butchured it, so please forgive me. Laying down besides you, Turning to look in your eyes, Mixed emotions; Not knowing what I should do, Kissing the side of your neck; Sweet scent, Stopping to look into your soul. Seeing that it might be wrong, The essence draggin me closer, Arms wrapped around your body, Kissing your lips tender, Stopping to look into your soul, Seeing that it might be wrong, Wanting to stop; Needing to continue, Wondering what I should say, Seeing you lay down on top of me, Kissing the side of my neck, Sending chills up my spine, Trying to resist; Needing to stop, Looking into your soul, Seeing that maybe this is right, I lean in to kiss again; Stoping under the midnight light Collecting our senses; Our lil' secret, ::hush:: dont let them know ::hush::
Ozymandias Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 I know not a lick of Italian but pulled at all of my Latin education for all I'm worth to try and understand the most general of meanings from the poem before I noticed you'd written out the English too, underneath. {:>) I any case, I was only able to garner (again, until the English) that the speaker was probably addressing a lover, but even written in this language I'm rather hopeless with, understanding maybe six to seven words and following the beat and tune of the piece I could hear the speaker's passion and fervency. Well done! Twice! On a side note, I think a Kender who's lost their dream is one of the saddest things I've ever heard of.
Archaneus Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 I like this one. Normally I don't like tuff about this sort of thing, but you pulled it off well. Nice job.
Vigil StarGazer Posted February 8, 2003 Report Posted February 8, 2003 I bet it sounds very nice when recited in Italian.. it's a beautiful language.
Rune Posted February 12, 2003 Report Posted February 12, 2003 My grandfather is Italian, My father first generation american. I wasnt allowed to learn the language growing up because of my father's rules...but it has always held a very special place in my heart because of my grandfather... it's really neat to see a poem written in the language. Reminded me of my grandfather for that reason. ^__^ Not because of the content. heh. Its beautiful. You did a great job Tassle, I am glad you shared it.
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