HopperWolf Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 (edited) This is where the Heroes rest, With readied swords, fixed beyonets, Rain sodden clothes and drenched in sweat, This is where the dead men rest. This is where the Heroes sit, In Dante’s halls, these caverns deep, The only sound as water drips, Heads on hands, the frozen sit. This is where time collides, Where Heroes then and now reside, The hall of chapions, it was lies, There is no peace when Heroes collide. This is what the dead men wish, To see once more the loved ones missed, Chasing dreams lost in this abyss, Dead men’s tourment with a wish. This is how our Heroes fare, Mortal sins and skin laid bare, Trapped inside eternal nightmares, This is what Death calls fair. Edited February 7, 2003 by HopperWolf
Archaneus Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 SWEEEETTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't jsut like this one, I love it. And welcome to the guild. You should apply for member. If you write another one like this, you got it.
Gyrfalcon Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 *Gyrfalcon grins* It is good! And as Archaneus noted, you really should post an application piece, HopperWolf.
DoomGaze Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 With an application, you should send one in right away, i love the unique rhyme scheme, i thought it stood out, and a poem about heroes, well that took the cake... Great Poem, i suggest you apply now, with that kinda skill, u'll get accepted definatly. Looking forward to reading more of your poems, really amazing :)
Rune Posted February 11, 2003 Report Posted February 11, 2003 Ooo such vivid mental images. Gah, and I almost missed this one! ;__; it was on the second page. Good thing I went back.... Its belated but so glad you joined us Hopper!
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