Passionsrejected05 Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 Confusion. What’s going on? Can you tell me now? You say you want me. But I can’t take it personally somehow? How do you feel? Do you really care? Or do you just want me to kiss you and not care? You don’t want a partner. Neither do I But I won’t let my emotions just sit there and hide. Make up your mind. Before I walk away. And you’ll never hear from me. See me Not another day.
Rune Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 A poetic look at the confusion between two people who are unsure of their feelings towards one another. Great job, Its beautiful in that it pinpoints a very hurtful situation that most people will go through at least once in their lives. You might try adding line breaks to inturupt the blocky-ness feeling that it appears to have..but thats just a personal note. You may prefer it to stay in its current layout. Thank you for sharing!
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