Passionsrejected05 Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 Nothing The dark is closing in. The knife in my heart is getting deeper. Don’t let me die! My sun is getting blacker. The clouds are getting heavier. My soul is scared. Don’t let me cry. Take me away. Fly to another day. I’m being burned. My heart is broken in two. The shadows are all I can see. I’ve never had this before. The kind of fear that tears at your mind. I want to hide. But I can’t escape from it. Loneliness is my fate. I guess I’ll just to have to wait for it. My impending doom. An endless nothing.
Falcon2001 Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 Very good, even though you ARE reading over my shoulder, so it's kind of useless to type it out but it increases the replies counter SPIFFY!
Archaneus Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 Ooh, a poem about loneliness and general unhappiness. I love it. Lol. Really, good work.
Vlad Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 This is another excellend one, o evilest of evil duck poets...
Rune Posted February 11, 2003 Report Posted February 11, 2003 So sad ;__; but written so well. My favorite part: I want to hide. But I can’t escape from it. Loneliness is my fate. I guess I’ll just to have to wait for it.
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