jamesdevin Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 Frozen My heart, frozen, trapped by time, love and emotion, feelings I don't have. My past, a riddle, a challenge with no end, a world unfair, unreal like never before. Lost emotions, frozen in time, my life, empty, like a pointless rhyme. My heart, my world, dark and unfair, full of people, like me, frozen in time. James Devin
Vlad Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 Take a candle, Warm your life, Get away from the handle, Of that glistening knife, Relax and enjoy, Your stay at the pen, Venting's a good toy, But to stop, you must know when. I don't mean to discourage, Nor be a bad influence, Just don't lead a scourge, Past the holy fence. This is my favorite of your poems so far...
Tasslehoff Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 you know, my heart feels cold, ofcourse, I do have a cold, but I mean.. Yea.. Erm. Nevermind.. lol
Archaneus Posted February 6, 2003 Report Posted February 6, 2003 My favorite or yours. I really like this one. Hope to see more like it.
Rune Posted February 11, 2003 Report Posted February 11, 2003 My past, a riddle, a challenge with no end, a world unfair, unreal like never before. My past... a riddle. For some reason that really sticks with me. Kept trying to come up with something more creative to say but none the less, great job.
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