Archaneus Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 We are reading Romeo & Juliet in English class and I got into that mode of thinking and start writing a poem. It came out sort of happy, go figure. Lol. Anyway, this is my pitiful attempt at writing a poem about love. Love is but a red, red rose Gently blooming with the sun With the passage of time This love doest fail And wilt thou to the ground Displaying it's ignorance And in that greif depicted Showing the passage of time Another bud doest spring forth Whilst blooming this one plucked A menacing hand which doest seek To destroy and befoul But in this task fail As the blooming bud Doest fall towards the dirt It is captured in lovers' grip This nurturing, holding it to Sun's kiss Doth cause it to bloom And in this blooming dost it flourish
Degenero Angelus Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 Not bad stuff. Is this the one you were trying to show me at lunch? Totally not your style, but good nonetheless.
Rune Posted February 7, 2003 Report Posted February 7, 2003 Great job capturing the era. If it isnt normally your style, you did a great job adapting. Thanks for sharing.
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