Lanzer Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 Grandma's Cook us dinner and buy us the best toys. They have some wrinkles but they bring a lot of joys. Grandma's really are so sweet. Even if they have corns on their feet. When its christmas you always get a Sweater. But you act like its cool because you love her. I love you grandma from the bottom of my heart. I will always love you, even though you shop at wal-mart. Now listen here and listen good. Love your grandma like a good person should. Call her right now and say, "your so great!" Do it now before its too late.
Impostor Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 (Is very reminded of that good ol' Adam Sandler song. (And no, not "Piece of Shit Car.")) Impostor in love with the sun
Tasslehoff Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 Ha Ha. Grandmas are crazy.. I love mine. =D
Peredhil Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 Awwww. So Coote! I wish one of my G'mas was still alive.
Rune Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 aww its so cute, and kinda sad. hehe, the walmart line was funny.
Archaneus Posted February 5, 2003 Report Posted February 5, 2003 If you meant it to be a funny poem, you succeded. I like. Imposter: Hey, I love that song! Lol.
Zariah Posted February 16, 2003 Report Posted February 16, 2003 Well I am a grammar freak so... I at first noticed: 1.) Grandma in the plural is NOT Grandma's. It is Grandmas. 2.) Cook should not be capitalized. 3.) Christmas should be capitalized 4.) Sweater should not be capitalized. 5.) Wal-Mart should be capitalized. 6.) "Your so great" should be "You're so great" 7.) Various commas must be added. You are sweet to remember your grandma; that's a thoughtful act.
Brute Posted February 19, 2003 Report Posted February 19, 2003 Heh, heh.. I like that poem Lanzer! What ever inspired you to write about Grandma?
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