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This life is just a big plot twist

And no one knows I exist

My life's a record spins and skips

But no-one gives a sh*t

 

One two three

Now one can care about me

Three four five

I just wanna fuc*ing die

 

Happy then sad my life flips around

One moent I'm up then I'm down

Why this sh*t gotta happen to me

It all a fu*king hell no one sees

 

(chours) :raven:

Posted

I figured as long as you can post, you were venting.

 

It's just it was so well done... I got this jab in my stomach. Hence the ouch.

 

I hope your Muse gives you light to go with your dark.

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I will echo Pere's comments and say ouch! and since that was the intended message then you did really well.

 

Never take my poems to seriously I seem to get in a depresswed state of mind often,never anything serious. So like um.....chill out I'm not gonna kill myself

Since you are an adult, I will respect that statement and urge you to please be upfront and honest with us if that ever does happen. People care about ya, which is why they are concerned.

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