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Falcon2001

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(12/2/01 12:23:45 am)

Reply If I...

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If I could find a girl

With the face of an angel

And the beauty of the dove

Combined with the fierce strength of the lioness

That would talk to me

Like me as a friend

I could die happy

 

If I could find a girl

With the intelligence of the masters

And the wit like a knife

Along with the brains that would make Einstein jealous

That would laugh with me

Like me as a poet

I could die happy

 

If I could find a girl

As kind as a goddess

As gentle as the touch of the rain in the night

Added to the intensity of the raging fire

That would cry with me

Like me as an author

I could die happy

 

I found a girl

With a beauty that could put the gods to shame

And a mind to rival Plato and Socrates at their height

With the kindness found only in the heart of a dove

That shares her troubles with me

Loves me for exactly who I am

So I can die happy

 

Yes, it's pretty bland, dry, stuff, but that's just too bad...whatever, yay!

Posted

peredhil31

Elder of Lists and Manners

Posts: 413

(12/2/01 6:31:25 am)

Reply Could you clone her please?

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Peredhil rises and cheers happily!

 

Rah!

 

I LIKE this one - bland or not. So there! Sticks out his tongue at Falcon impudently

 

You write 'em - let US criticize 'em.

 

Welcome back online.

 

-P

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Falcon2001

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(12/2/01 1:43:18 pm)

Reply Sorry, P, she's all mine...

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Well, soon enough, anyways...

Peredhil, could you send the new passwords to my email at silvertrip_2001@yahoo.com? Thanks, well, anyone can if they see this and have them...

Cya!

Posted

Gyrfalcon25

Bard

Posts: 117

(12/2/01 9:29:50 pm)

Reply Re: Sorry, P, she's all mine...

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Happy poetry! YAY! ^_^

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Lady Celes Crusader

Initiate

Posts: 20

(12/2/01 10:35:51 pm)

Reply Re: Sorry, P, she's all mine...

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My... you could tame any girls's heart by saying that she have the face of an angel and the beauty of a dove. (yes, lots of girls are still melting when they are complimented this way)

Posted

andrea hawk

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Posts: 3

(12/8/01 12:49:28 pm)

Reply I like it

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Hey Will... that's cool! Another masterpiece... I really like it!! hehe... who's it about

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Falcon2001

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Posts: 141

(12/12/01 4:38:02 pm)

Reply Re: I like it

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Celes - Yes, I know that girls melt...believe me, I'm working on one right now...actually just ask around and you can find out most of the story.

Andrea - I'm sorry Andrea, I wrote it about Jessa. Yeah, sure, like that would ever happen, you know who it's about, girl

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