Vlad Posted January 27, 2003 Report Posted January 27, 2003 If I could fly, Then I would soar, And I would lie, On the ground no more. If I was free, I would be myself, Forget society, Live for my health. If I knew love, Then I'd find happiness, Give her a white dove, Bask in her loveliness. Hmm, this might make a good song...
Degenero Angelus Posted January 27, 2003 Report Posted January 27, 2003 It'd make a pretty good song, if you don't mind 45 second song . A lot of people could relate to the feeling conveyed. I've felt that a lot.
Rune Posted January 29, 2003 Report Posted January 29, 2003 Great poem Vlad, It's so sweet at the end. Thank you for sharing it.
Peredhil Posted January 29, 2003 Report Posted January 29, 2003 Another one to post on my cubicle wall! He's on a roll! short, but complete.
Vlad Posted January 29, 2003 Author Report Posted January 29, 2003 You post these on your cubicle walls?
Peredhil Posted January 29, 2003 Report Posted January 29, 2003 only the ones like snow or fly that cannot offend someone with sexual, political, religious, or depressive content..
Vlad Posted January 29, 2003 Author Report Posted January 29, 2003 I have a new mission. Write happy, non-offensive, single-minded poems, that cannot have implications brought out by even the most twisted of individuals. *looks around at the members of the pen* (no-one in particulour (sp?)) Never mind.
The Portrait of Zool Posted January 29, 2003 Report Posted January 29, 2003 I find that very offensive Vlad. (Ha! J/K )
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