Vlad Posted January 25, 2003 Report Posted January 25, 2003 Relax, Enjoy the view, Life steals itself, Away from you. Relax, No ill will come, Until your time, And deeds are done. Relax, It'll be okay, I'm here with you, Day, by day, by day...
Rune Posted January 27, 2003 Report Posted January 27, 2003 Rune giggles at the poem and turns it into a song, similiar to a child's nursery rhyme. She goes about the keep humming and singing the rhyme to herself as she canters through the different rooms looking for trouble. This is one of my favorites! Its one of those poems that you read and go "oh yeah.. " afterwards because it reminds you of the simple things in life. Its also catchy..and easy to remember. Reminded me of a nursery rhyme or a prayer. Thank you so much for sharing.
Degenero Angelus Posted January 27, 2003 Report Posted January 27, 2003 It does work pretty well as a song. The second stanza reminded me of Macbeth. I can't really say why, though.
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