Vlad Posted January 25, 2003 Report Posted January 25, 2003 A shrouded plain, Where all are safe, Life sans disdain, For a lord or waif, Soothing fog, That covers all, Over the bog, It doesn't apall, A pure clean sheet, As white as wings, An angel so sweet, Whose voice sings, A sense of peace, Silent beauty awaits, Here troubles cease, Beyond pearly gates.
Rune Posted January 27, 2003 Report Posted January 27, 2003 Beautiful Vlad. I can just imagine it, and it flows so well. Thank you for sharing.
Degenero Angelus Posted January 27, 2003 Report Posted January 27, 2003 The perfect reason for to never write structured poetry. I can't think of words that rhyme and work as well as that. I just can't do it. It's a real gift, Vlad, and you've got it.
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