Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Posted January 15, 2003 Yui Temae Huntress Posts: 307 (10/29/02 9:06:35 am) Reply Lord Ishmael's "Darkness" (Assembly Rm) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Hm. Am I showing just how behind I am in my reading? Ishmael, I just wanted to comment on how emotionally evocative I thought "Darkness" was, how easily it seemed to make me see and feel the strange sensations of the second-person self. I loved that, and I came away with not only great curiosity as to the particulars of the mystery but also a sort of awe at how masterfully I thought you used a combination of sensory-description and scenery-description to build the work. It was just enough to draw the reader into the experience while just little enough to force them to dream it into something uniquely-tailored to them. Wonderful! I want to see more, oh busy Blood Lord. Sincerely, ~Yui
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Posted January 15, 2003 gwaihir1 Elder of Lists and Poetry Posts: 320 (11/16/02 7:37:31 am) Reply Re: Lord Ishmael's "Darkness" (Assembly Rm) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- (he couldn't get in here to see it, but I pasted it to him some time ago, before he went always-idle again. Edited by: gwaihir1 at: 11/18/02 11:50:54 am
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Posted January 15, 2003 Yui Temae Huntress Posts: 315 (11/18/02 7:13:39 am) Reply Re: Lord Ishmael's "Darkness" (Assembly Rm) -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Thank you, Gwaihir. I hadn't really expected him to get to see it, and I appreciate the effort.
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