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Falcon2001

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(12/12/01 4:35:34 pm)

Reply Sick -Your opinions please!

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This isn't one of my better ones, but it is a SONG, not a poem. That's key to the entire song...to those who are not familiar with my work, this is NOT typical of my stuff.

I had the chorus (I'm SICK) running through my head for days now...it came as I walk through the school during lunch, passing all the cliques in their little alcoves and territories. It just makes me sick, how the entire school has broken themselves into nice seperate little fragments, all bent on the destruction of the others...well, all except I guess the stoners and preps, they don't have the brain cells neccessary...THERE, EVEN I'M DOING IT!

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Gyrfalcon25

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(12/12/01 5:10:27 pm)

Reply Re: Sick -Your opinions please!

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*Gyr laughs softly* Aye, I agree on the druggies and preps.

 

Hmm... I think its pretty good, myself. Is it meant to be hard rock, pop, rap, heavy metal...?

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