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Falcon2001

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(11/20/01 4:45:16 pm)

Reply The Burning Times

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Heh, remember the deal, Zadown!

Heeheehee...

Anyway, I really liked this story. The perspective is unique and(from my personal experience), rather hard to work well with, but you did wonderfully! I liked the humor, the demons, the conflict!

The only thing I saw as weak was the ending, which kinda dropped fast...Well, I'll type more, but this is WONDERFUL!

Fully reccomend that you get it published!

Cioden Darkeye

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