Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Posted January 15, 2003 Jechum LoreMaster Posts: 139 (10/29/01 5:03:49 am) Reply In the Old Way by Yui Temae -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- pub79.ezboard.com/fthemig...D=81.topic For thrown together words it’s very good! I think it could use a little work and be great. I would recommend maybe dropping the word “Old”. Also here: Hurt. Fight and Hate. Die. Teach and Rest. Cry. It seems you’ve thrown two ideas together. Some day in the Old Way, I too may be able to throw words together and create pictures. I would really like to see you work the piece a little more for I think you have a diamond in the rough. Jechum Newbie, Mage of Shadows the Pen is Mightier than the Sword - Lore Master Edited by: Jechum at: 10/29/01 5:05:15 am
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