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Small and intense, perfect for a lazy reader like me. Every part keeps the suspence up, feels like there is much more around the corner ... like a spiral slowly unwinding.

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peredhil31:

 

Yah!

 

Peredhil runs in small circles yapping like an excited dog.

 

Some one gets it!

 

Actually, I have to give credit to Zadown for Spirals even continuing - I'd quit writing on it, when a chance comment of his told me someone was reading it - and wanted to see more!

 

So I started up again.

 

This style is different for me. Instead of plotting it out and then writing, I've been trying to put myself in the main character's mind, fill my senses with his, and then just write what he perceives.

 

The plot has surprised me once or twice with things I hadn't foreseen.

 

Peredhil

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Gyrfalcon25:

 

I like it... very interesting, well written, waiting to find out what type of mage he is (I assume that he is a mage already...)

 

The Voices remind me of Wheel of Time, and what some male channelers complain of...

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peredhil31:

 

I've never read that one. Jordan?

 

I've heard that I've stolen a number of things from it though - which means he must be stealing from the same classic sources as I!

 

Peredhil

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Zadown:

 

Well, still reading it. I just isolated the thing that I most like about it - it is unconventional, I can't see how it will go forward. I've read so much average stuff that that is very refreshing.

 

Goes to tug Peredhil's sleeve so that he'd write more parts.

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