Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Report Posted January 15, 2003 I sometimes debate on whether I should post when I only have complimentary things to say, and nothing deep, but I found this poem Really neat. Grim, cold, impressive.
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Posted January 15, 2003 peredhil31: Too true. A different perspective on the subject Orlan; a good read, or at least I enjoyed it immensley! In the third stanza -> exist In the seventh -> duece. That small spelling errors exist impresses me even more - to me it would indicate that this was written quickly, instead of crafted and built laboriously. Wow. Peredhil who himself can't seem to spell today. Edited by: peredhil31 at: 10/16/01 2:20:13 pm
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Posted January 15, 2003 Zool47: A powerful piece, but technicalities aside, I find myself idly pondering - for whom the clock ticks. ~Zool~ Elder of Elders, The Pen is Mightier than the Sword. Bard of Terra, Patron Saint of Aspiring Bards. Elder than dirt, more foolish than a jester, able to trip over the smallest logic in a single step. It's... Oh, you know.
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Posted January 15, 2003 peredhil31: Funny you should say that Elder Zoolio - SEVERAL people have asked me if the poem was directed at them. Which was a relief, because I saw some aspects of myself in it too. It's a powerful piece of work that can touch so many people so personally, and cause them to reevaluate themselves and the way they deal with others...
Archive Posted January 15, 2003 Author Report Posted January 15, 2003 Orlan: Gee, several people have asked you? Apparently I'm supposed to be mad at more people then I thought lol. Nah, this isn't about any specific people, they might have been in my mind when I wrote it, but that's how writing works. And Pered: I'll be damned if I can ever spell exsist correctly Stupid "x"s sounding like "s"s and "s"s sounding like "4"s.
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