Falcon2001 Posted August 28, 2002 Report Posted August 28, 2002 Yep, still alive Something darker, find your way in Greet me lightly and hold me close The sky is sere in my moral plain And lightning and thunder fall again Something darker Something true Something sinking Inside you Something that Can never die A voice in the dark From way up on high That's it, I can't think right now. Oh well, have a nice day. Cioden Darkeye Quill-Bearer - The Pen is Mightier than the Sword Owner of the Reply Raven - Enemy to all those who never post responses "Oh my God, I'm LEAKING POETRY!"
Gyrfalcon Posted August 29, 2002 Report Posted August 29, 2002 I thought it was pretty good, though as you say, its only a start. Maybe pick it up and continue it later, when the creativity strikes you again?
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